Tuesday, March 3, 2009

those 5 minutes with you................




those 5 minutes with you................


time and tide waits for nothing
but that day i experienced a different thing
as i held your hand in my hand
i blurred all my thoughts
even though i fought
i wish i was time
so that i can freeze the moment
controlled blinking of my eyes
so a to look at your pretty face
with every passing second
i felt i was in heaven
finally the train arrived
and she left without saying anything
wish i was a bit intelligent
to understand your signs
and say the feelings in my heart




If u find the poem interesting
then please let me know
Any sort of comments and suggestion are welcomed.

4 comments:

aman.v.paliwal said...

abe hasne se accha kuch likh deta

:)

Anonymous said...

hey hi...jus went thru ur poems...Good enuf i must say..in fact the best ones i have ever come across....hmmmm made me ur fan huh!!! neha...

madhur said...

hmmmm....nice one...good...so my frnd is falling in love!!!!

hahahahaha

aman.v.paliwal said...

madhur,neha thanks 4 reading n commenting


:)

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